candies (another tsw/sw cuz i dont play anything else)

is this good enough

  • yes

    Votes: 13 81.3%
  • OFC NOT U SUCK!!!!11!!!!

    Votes: 1 6.3%
  • idk i havent looked at it

    Votes: 2 12.5%

  • Total voters
    16
????????????? Then, why post(and have u tried making a bottle/jar, it’s hard af)
We know that building a map is hard for us, but if you put efforts in your map i think it would turned out pretty good.
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Sweet! So, this map looks nice. However, there are stuffs which needs improvements.

Suggestion(s) ;
—I saw that some islands aren't completely aligned. The shape turned out a bit bad, you need to fixed the candy islands with proper alignment.
–The mid, it looks cool but the jar could be improved you need to have a better share for the jar so it will look more appealing for the eye.
—Remove some stuffs which don't fit on the theme like those things near the jar, im not sure what are those but i think it doesn't fit the theme.

Overall, nice job! :)
The stuff around the jar are candies Fyi.I wasn’t as good for alignment when I made this, it was very difficult to figure out what went where when I completely messed up the first time and had to scramble about 10 islands cuz they looked bad. when I get the chance I’ll try to move them and make them look better
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The stuff around the jar are candies Fyi.I wasn’t as good for alignment when I made this, it was very difficult to figure out what went where when I completely messed up the first time and had to scramble about 10 islands cuz they looked bad. when I get the chance I’ll try to move them and make them look better
To make them aligned, try building a pattern that looks like this :
IMG_20190106_203603_500.jpg

yeah, the drawing is terrible! xD
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