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seacosmos
HELPPPPPPPPP


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CinderPuppyEyes
CinderPuppyEyes
LEMME HELPPPPPPPPP idk how but imma try anyways :,)
CinderPuppyEyes
CinderPuppyEyes
Okiee welp, what point of view are you gonna use for starters?
seacosmos
seacosmos
3rd person :P but like there’s insight to what the doggo’s thinking and stuff..if that makes sense xD

yes this is about dogs. I am sorry but it was the animal used in the dream i had abt this
CinderPuppyEyes
CinderPuppyEyes
Oooh, okiee welp, maybe start with some sort of tension?

E.g. something like a chase between the dog and a human who is going to do something abusive it?
CinderPuppyEyes
CinderPuppyEyes
You could also use something where it's at the start of the dog's life and then the book switches to a human pov or something, idk, I suck at story beginnings xD
seacosmos
seacosmos
I like your thinking thoo :O i actually might use it
CinderPuppyEyes
CinderPuppyEyes
I was actually helpful omgggg :o xD
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