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...Dark storm clouds form in the distance over high mountains. I feel lonely, sitting in the gloom of a summer storm, by myself. I have nobody to hold me, nobody to whisper in my ear and tell me everything will be OK, nobody but myself.

I spot a flash of lightning in the distance, and I jump off of my feet. I feel like a dead leaf in the Autumn wind. I keep staring at the horizon, I know I am alone now, but something near me is stirring...

...Someone is watching my every move, and I know who it is. He's been following me everywhere and he's never gonna stop until he hunts me down. I can hear his voice, he's whispering something, like before, but I can't understand him...

...Before I can even tell myself to, I'm running. My legs are moving fast, faster than ever before, and my arms are swinging rapidly. I don't care if anything happens to me before I get back, I just can't let him catch me. I will keep running forever, he will never catch me. He will never hurt me. I will survive."

Did you write that?

Yep. I used help from Google though

WOW, it's awesome!!! How do you think of that? ;-;

Thank chu, sis! Idk. Why don't you try writing something? ._.

I'll try... One of the things I can't do is think of something to write about ._. You give me an idea

I usually just randomly think of something and start a story with that xD

Alright

I got something from the first sentence:
I sit on a hill, the wind blowing through my hair. I stare at the landscape in front of me, I can almost hear the waves lapping over each other.
Without the noise of the town everything is so quiet and I feel much more relaxed.
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Awesome! Much better than mine ._.

Well... I didn't read all of yours XD

Amazing

Thank chu, Queen of Chu