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Ah, In my high school, the teachers wouldn't really care

Dark humor? Ooo, do you still have the dark version of the writing, I would love to read it

I don't know if I can, it's on my school computer at my school. But I can give you the rundown of it. XD

A girl, names Rose (haha) is unloved by everyone she knows, except her mother. So when the mother dies, she is devastated and flees to the woods. (Also uh, the mother is like super famous so Rose hates the crowds now) Her father doesn't care about her at all, which makes her bitterness rise until she confronts her father.....

She finds out that her father killed her mother so that the press (news people) would go crazy about it. She then has to prove that he's guilty and send him to jail.

That's not real real dark in my mind, but I got nervous and didn't think the teacher would like it, so I changed it a bit xD

Unless you went into specific details, it's not that dark

but nevertheless, a great theme to a story. I would love to see even a short story about it

Yeah, but I worry a lot so I end up deleting half my stories rip.

Oh I also forgot that her brothers will beat her until she bleeds and her father doesn't care. Sknfjf-

Aw, that sucks

Damn

*Eric reads it*
"Its not that dark."
*I add in last part*
"Well, damn"
XD

Cause that sentence was in details, the others were not

Yeah xD

Aww addy is hitting on eric too

Yikes, no

KS please, I didn't ask you to join this conversation. Have you forgotten that I have a bf that I love more than anything? I talk to Eric because he's a writer also.

And because you know, he's a friend xD

I mean, I don't write that much as I used too but I do write when I have free time

So ye, still a writer tho

Istg ks stalks everything I post. Go look on my profile. He comments on like everything And ngl it gets annoying

Ye, I saw

He calls people boomers even tho it only affects old people or people older than you

Ikr lol. He says I hit on everyone lmfao. I just like talling mHm-

KS is a good person, he just likes to bother people

I know him

Yes, but bothering people isn't always a great thing xD