Yeah, I like to write mystery and fantasy. I love describing things, which sounds really weird ik xD describing a scene, or how someone looks/feels, like this: "her heart beat faster and faster, until she closed her eyes and let herself breath again. He was alive, she knew that. But would he be the same person? The same kind, gentle, and loving person she knew to be her brother?" Just a random thing i came up with xD
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_IshEric
Yes, me too!
Describing a scene for me is hard lol
I don't know what words to use and end up writing something completely garbage
oof, I felt that lmao
Describing a scene for me is hard lol
I don't know what words to use and end up writing something completely garbage
oof, I felt that lmao
addi
Oh, different authors different styles xD describing something is my favorite part of writing! XD
"The crisp, cold air numbed his body. His mouth was dry, but his eyes filled with tears. Would anyone dare come looking for him, deep in the snowy woods? Or was he stuck here, to slowly and painfully die?"
"The crisp, cold air numbed his body. His mouth was dry, but his eyes filled with tears. Would anyone dare come looking for him, deep in the snowy woods? Or was he stuck here, to slowly and painfully die?"
addi
I will probably be making a "story thread" soon xD
_IshEric
True, true.
Describing the part like the main thing a story should have, plus, it's fun doing so
I like to describe a story with dialogue such as:
"Alright, just one hug" Her soft arms agents my shoulders felt like heaven to me.
"Thank you!" That bright smile she always makes around me when she's happy always gets me.
Idk, sounds stupid
I've made a lot of stories on here, most of them are bleh
Describing the part like the main thing a story should have, plus, it's fun doing so
I like to describe a story with dialogue such as:
"Alright, just one hug" Her soft arms agents my shoulders felt like heaven to me.
"Thank you!" That bright smile she always makes around me when she's happy always gets me.
Idk, sounds stupid
I've made a lot of stories on here, most of them are bleh
addi
No that doesn't sound stupid at all! It's beautiful! ^^ I'm alright at dialogue, but I could improve a lot xD
"Sunsets are beautiful, aren't they?" She turned to look at me with her cute little nose that always scrunched together when she smiled.
"Yeah, they are," I pulled her into a tight hug, then I grinned mischievously and messed up her hair.
"Sunsets are beautiful, aren't they?" She turned to look at me with her cute little nose that always scrunched together when she smiled.
"Yeah, they are," I pulled her into a tight hug, then I grinned mischievously and messed up her hair.
addi
"Hey!" She exclaimed, "it took me forever to do my hair you meanie!"
I chuckled softly, "I'll pay for ice cream if you forgive me your majesty."
"Done! All forgiven!" She quickly hopped in the car.
I chuckled softly, "I'll pay for ice cream if you forgive me your majesty."
"Done! All forgiven!" She quickly hopped in the car.
_IshEric
I been trying to improve my "describing" skills but it's hard, I hate it
Aw, that's nice
See? That's what I want to write. I don't know how to describe it but is that one part that gets the reader to get the photo into their mind.
Aw, that's nice
See? That's what I want to write. I don't know how to describe it but is that one part that gets the reader to get the photo into their mind.
addi
Yeah, I usually use a thesaurus or something to help me if I just can't find the right word to use.
_IshEric
Everywhere I go, I keep hearing that but it semi helps me. I doesn't really help me that much.
Nice to meet you
Yes, I do indeed write!
I also think it's a nice way to express how you feel which is why I love doing so
Well, I love writing about Mystery, horror, adventure, and love
Writing is pretty cool if you know how to express yourself